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author | Anthony McGlone <anthonymcglone@gmail.com> | 2023-01-03 15:10:43 +0000 |
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committer | Petr Kovář <pknbe@volny.cz> | 2023-02-04 14:16:11 +0000 |
commit | fe85ae1c572ae8eef4cff69df896a152229f44b5 (patch) | |
tree | 4abec671e25d08f8184637c8d7a8c9101802fc86 /gnome-help | |
parent | 5e1bdcde3631a63f931fa471942f9cec27175aa1 (diff) | |
download | gnome-user-docs-fe85ae1c572ae8eef4cff69df896a152229f44b5.tar.gz |
#151 Update Parental Controls page as per CR feedback
Diffstat (limited to 'gnome-help')
-rw-r--r-- | gnome-help/C/parental-controls.page | 79 |
1 files changed, 31 insertions, 48 deletions
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/parental-controls.page b/gnome-help/C/parental-controls.page index e301606f..6f487604 100644 --- a/gnome-help/C/parental-controls.page +++ b/gnome-help/C/parental-controls.page @@ -6,30 +6,12 @@ <info> <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/> - <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/> - <revision version="gnome:42" status="final" date="2022-04-02"/> <revision version="gnome:43" status="final" date="2022-12-13"/> <credit type="author"> - <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name> - <email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email> - </credit> - <credit type="author"> <name>Anthony McGlone</name> <email>anthonymcglone2022@gmail.com</email> </credit> - <credit type="editor"> - <name>Shaun McCance</name> - <email>shaunm@gnome.org</email> - </credit> - <credit type="editor"> - <name>Michael Hill</name> - <email>mdhillca@gmail.com</email> - </credit> - <credit type="editor"> - <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name> - <email>kittykat3756@gmail.com</email> - </credit> <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> @@ -38,30 +20,31 @@ <title>Add parental controls</title> - <p>Parental controls can be applied to a user to:</p> + <p>Parents can use the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> application to prevent children from accessing harmful content.</p> + + <p>An administrator can use this application to:</p> <list> <item> - <p>Restrict their access to web browsers and applications.</p> + <p>Restrict a user's access to web browsers and applications.</p> </item> <item> - <p>Prevent them from installing applications.</p> + <p>Prevent a user from installing applications.</p> </item> <item> - <p>Allow them to only access age-appropriate applications.</p> + <p>Allow a user to only access age-appropriate applications.</p> </item> </list> <note> <p> - The Parental Controls application (Malcontent) requires - applications to be installed via flatpak or Flathub. + <gui>Parental Controls</gui> requires applications to be installed via Flatpak or Flathub. </p> </note> <section id="restrictwebbrowsers"> <title>Restrict web browsers</title> - <p>Parental Controls allows an administrator to disable browser access for a user.</p> + <p><gui>Parental Controls</gui> allows an administrator to disable browser access for a user.</p> <steps> <item> <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> @@ -70,15 +53,15 @@ </item> <item> <p> - Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel. + Select <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel. </p> </item> <item> - <p>Under <gui>Other Users</gui>, click on the user to whom you wish to apply the controls. + <p>Under <gui>Other Users</gui>, select the user to whom you wish to apply the controls. </p> </item> <item> - <p>Click on the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> tab. + <p>Select the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> tab. </p> <note> <p>The tab only appears if <gui>Parental Controls</gui> is installed and enabled. @@ -87,12 +70,12 @@ </item> <item> <p> - Click <gui>Unlock</gui> on the <gui>Permission Required</gui> dialog. + Press <gui>Unlock</gui> in the <gui>Permission Required</gui> dialog. </p> </item> <item> <p> - Input your password and authenticate to unlock the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> dialog. + Enter your password and authenticate to unlock the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> dialog. </p> </item> <item> @@ -104,10 +87,10 @@ </section> <section id="restrictapplications"> <title>Restrict applications</title> - <p>Parental Controls provides a list of applications that an administrator can disable.</p> + <p><gui>Parental Controls</gui> provides a list of applications that an administrator can disable.</p> <note> <p> - Existing applications (which are not installed via flatpak) will not appear in this list. + Existing applications (which are not installed via Flatpak) will not appear in this list. </p> </note> <steps> @@ -118,15 +101,15 @@ </item> <item> <p> - Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel. + Select <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel. </p> </item> <item> - <p>Under <gui>Other Users</gui>, click on the user to whom you wish to apply the controls. + <p>Under <gui>Other Users</gui>, select the user to whom you wish to apply the controls. </p> </item> <item> - <p>Click on the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> tab. + <p>Select the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> tab. </p> <note> <p>The tab only appears if <gui>Parental Controls</gui> is installed and enabled. @@ -135,12 +118,12 @@ </item> <item> <p> - Click <gui>Unlock</gui> on the <gui>Permission Required</gui> dialog. + Press <gui>Unlock</gui> in the <gui>Permission Required</gui> dialog. </p> </item> <item> <p> - Input your password and authenticate to unlock the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> dialog. + Enter your password and authenticate to unlock the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> dialog. </p> </item> <item> @@ -157,7 +140,7 @@ </section> <section id="restrictapplicationinstallation"> <title>Restrict application installation</title> - <p>Parental Controls allows an administrator to deny installation privileges to a user.</p> + <p><gui>Parental Controls</gui> allows an administrator to deny installation privileges to a user.</p> <steps> <item> <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> @@ -166,15 +149,15 @@ </item> <item> <p> - Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel. + Select <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel. </p> </item> <item> - <p>Under <gui>Other Users</gui>, click on the user to whom you wish to apply the controls. + <p>Under <gui>Other Users</gui>, select the user to whom you wish to apply the controls. </p> </item> <item> - <p>Click on the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> tab. + <p>Select the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> tab. </p> <note> <p>The tab only appears if <gui>Parental Controls</gui> is installed and enabled. @@ -183,12 +166,12 @@ </item> <item> <p> - Click <gui>Unlock</gui> on the <gui>Permission Required</gui> dialog. + Press <gui>Unlock</gui> in the <gui>Permission Required</gui> dialog. </p> </item> <item> <p> - Input your password and authenticate to unlock the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> dialog. + Enter your password and authenticate to unlock the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> dialog. </p> </item> <item> @@ -211,15 +194,15 @@ </item> <item> <p> - Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel. + Select <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel. </p> </item> <item> - <p>Under <gui>Other Users</gui>, click on the user to whom you wish to apply the controls. + <p>Under <gui>Other Users</gui>, select the user to whom you wish to apply the controls. </p> </item> <item> - <p>Click on the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> tab. + <p>Select the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> tab. </p> <note> <p>The tab only appears if <gui>Parental Controls</gui> is installed and enabled. @@ -228,12 +211,12 @@ </item> <item> <p> - Click <gui>Unlock</gui> on the <gui>Permission Required</gui> dialog. + Press <gui>Unlock</gui> in the <gui>Permission Required</gui> dialog. </p> </item> <item> <p> - Input your password and authenticate to unlock the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> dialog. + Enter your password and authenticate to unlock the <gui>Parental Controls</gui> dialog. </p> </item> <item> |