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| author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2014-05-08 01:28:45 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2014-05-07 20:13:27 -0400 |
| commit | b8bde11658366290521e3d03316378b482600323 (patch) | |
| tree | ccecde357ccb3b109e69aa2a6227f7cd7c71aedc /man/systemd-networkd-wait-online.service.xml | |
| parent | dca348bcbb462305864526c587495a14a76bfcde (diff) | |
| download | systemd-b8bde11658366290521e3d03316378b482600323.tar.gz | |
doc: comma placement corrections and word order
Set commas where there should be some.
Some improvements to word order.
Diffstat (limited to 'man/systemd-networkd-wait-online.service.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/systemd-networkd-wait-online.service.xml | 4 |
1 files changed, 2 insertions, 2 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemd-networkd-wait-online.service.xml b/man/systemd-networkd-wait-online.service.xml index 1d368a23f9..3083588a37 100644 --- a/man/systemd-networkd-wait-online.service.xml +++ b/man/systemd-networkd-wait-online.service.xml @@ -58,8 +58,8 @@ <para><command>systemd-networkd-wait-online</command> is a one-shot system service that waits for the network to be configured. - By default it will wait for all links it is aware of that are managed by - <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-networkd.service</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>, + By default, it will wait for all links it is aware of and which are managed by + <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-networkd.service</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry> to be fully configured or failed, and for at least one link to gain a carrier.</para> </refsect1> |