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diff --git a/doc/build/content/session.txt b/doc/build/content/session.txt
index 17fa969a3..b1f4bc369 100644
--- a/doc/build/content/session.txt
+++ b/doc/build/content/session.txt
@@ -672,9 +672,9 @@ A (really, really) common question is when does the contextual session get creat
                         Session.remove() <-
     web response   <-  
 
-Above, we illustrate a *typical* organization of duties, where the "Web Framework" layer has some integration built-in to manage the span of ORM sessions.  Upon the initial handling of an incoming web request, the framework passes control to a controller.  The controller then calls `Session()` when it wishes to work with the ORM; this method establishes the contextual Session which will remain until its removed.  Disparate parts of the controller code may all call `Session()` and will get the same session object.  Then, when the controller has completed and the reponse is to be sent to the web server, the framework **closes out** the current contextual session, above using the `remove()` method which removes the session from the context altogether.
+Above, we illustrate a *typical* organization of duties, where the "Web Framework" layer has some integration built-in to manage the span of ORM sessions.  Upon the initial handling of an incoming web request, the framework passes control to a controller.  The controller then calls `Session()` when it wishes to work with the ORM; this method establishes the contextual Session which will remain until it's removed.  Disparate parts of the controller code may all call `Session()` and will get the same session object.  Then, when the controller has completed and the reponse is to be sent to the web server, the framework **closes out** the current contextual session, above using the `remove()` method which removes the session from the context altogether.
 
-As an alternative, the "finalization" step can also call `Session.close()`, which will leave the same session object in place, may be used.  Which one is better ?  For a web framework which runs from a fixed pool of threads, it doesn't matter much.  For a framework which runs a **variable** number of threads, or which **creates and disposes** of a thread for each request, `remove()` is better, since it leaves no resources associated with the thread which might not exist.
+As an alternative, the "finalization" step can also call `Session.close()`, which will leave the same session object in place.  Which one is better ?  For a web framework which runs from a fixed pool of threads, it doesn't matter much.  For a framework which runs a **variable** number of threads, or which **creates and disposes** of a thread for each request, `remove()` is better, since it leaves no resources associated with the thread which might not exist.
 
 * Why close out the session at all ?  Why not just leave it going so the next request doesn't have to do as many queries ?