Fixed #30573 -- Rephrased documentation to avoid words that minimise the involved difficulty.

This patch does not remove all occurrences of the words in question.
Rather, I went through all of the occurrences of the words listed
below, and judged if they a) suggested the reader had some kind of
knowledge/experience, and b) if they added anything of value (including
tone of voice, etc). I left most of the words alone. I looked at the
following words:

- simply/simple
- easy/easier/easiest
- obvious
- just
- merely
- straightforward
- ridiculous

Thanks to Carlton Gibson for guidance on how to approach this issue, and
to Tim Bell for providing the idea. But the enormous lion's share of
thanks go to Adam Johnson for his patient and helpful review.

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/docs/ref/contrib/gis/layermapping.txt b/docs/ref/contrib/gis/layermapping.txt
index 8aef4a1614..9d9fee988f 100644
--- a/docs/ref/contrib/gis/layermapping.txt
+++ b/docs/ref/contrib/gis/layermapping.txt
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ then inserting into a GeoDjango model.
     that :class:`LayerMapping` is using too much memory, set
     :setting:`DEBUG` to ``False`` in your settings.  When :setting:`DEBUG`
     is set to ``True``, Django :ref:`automatically logs <faq-see-raw-sql-queries>`
-    *every* SQL query -- thus, when SQL statements contain geometries, it is
-    easy to consume more memory than is typical.
+    *every* SQL query -- and when SQL statements contain geometries, this may
+    consume more memory than is typical.
 
 Example
 =======
@@ -75,10 +75,10 @@ Example
     Saved: Name: 2
     Saved: Name: 3
 
-Here, :class:`LayerMapping` just transformed the three geometries from the
-shapefile in their original spatial reference system (WGS84) to the spatial
-reference system of the GeoDjango model (NAD83).  If no spatial reference
-system is defined for the layer, use the ``source_srs`` keyword with a
+Here, :class:`LayerMapping` transformed the three geometries from the shapefile
+in their original spatial reference system (WGS84) to the spatial reference
+system of the GeoDjango model (NAD83).  If no spatial reference system is
+defined for the layer, use the ``source_srs`` keyword with a
 :class:`~django.contrib.gis.gdal.SpatialReference` object to specify one.
 
 ``LayerMapping`` API