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| author | Neil Conway <neilc@samurai.com> | 2007-05-15 19:43:51 +0000 |
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| committer | Neil Conway <neilc@samurai.com> | 2007-05-15 19:43:51 +0000 |
| commit | dfcf99bf93776a9bdd6fc43f99b6092fe7ed6e89 (patch) | |
| tree | 62a68d6dfad35ff25b225efe97bdfd7223448a4b /doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml | |
| parent | 79ba540b78c69b9d91214899283a843ce40c52d5 (diff) | |
| download | postgresql-dfcf99bf93776a9bdd6fc43f99b6092fe7ed6e89.tar.gz | |
Fix a bunch of bad grammar in the docs: "<link>, which see for more
information" is un-good English.
Diffstat (limited to 'doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml')
| -rw-r--r-- | doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml | 11 |
1 files changed, 6 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml index 1461746cfe..ce28f2ad59 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ <!-- -$PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml,v 1.7 2006/09/16 00:30:16 momjian Exp $ +$PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml,v 1.8 2007/05/15 19:43:51 neilc Exp $ PostgreSQL documentation --> @@ -52,8 +52,8 @@ ALTER ROLE <replaceable class="PARAMETER">name</replaceable> RESET <replaceable> <para> The first variant of this command listed in the synopsis can change many of the role attributes that can be specified in - <xref linkend="sql-createrole" endterm="sql-createrole-title">, - which see for details. (All the possible attributes are covered, + <xref linkend="sql-createrole" endterm="sql-createrole-title">. + (All the possible attributes are covered, except that there are no options for adding or removing memberships; use <xref linkend="SQL-GRANT" endterm="SQL-GRANT-title"> and <xref linkend="SQL-REVOKE" endterm="SQL-REVOKE-title"> for that.) @@ -127,8 +127,9 @@ ALTER ROLE <replaceable class="PARAMETER">name</replaceable> RESET <replaceable> <listitem> <para> These clauses alter attributes originally set by - <xref linkend="SQL-CREATEROLE" endterm="SQL-CREATEROLE-title">, - which see for more information. + <xref linkend="SQL-CREATEROLE" + endterm="SQL-CREATEROLE-title">. For more information, see the + <command>CREATE ROLE</command> reference page. </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> |