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| author | Jonathan Maw <jonathan.maw@codethink.co.uk> | 2012-08-03 15:42:04 +0100 |
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| committer | Jonathan Maw <jonathan.maw@codethink.co.uk> | 2012-08-03 15:42:04 +0100 |
| commit | eece46578e8efac9d656ae8b9418186df4d1b197 (patch) | |
| tree | 09f7620db11e8bb83f63f1f3c23f793a0e53a486 | |
| parent | 3bb2b1bde128e30872de17925a8288891c436017 (diff) | |
| download | node-startup-controller-eece46578e8efac9d656ae8b9418186df4d1b197.tar.gz | |
Use passive language in test-test-environment-setup.xml
Changes the single instance of "we" in this file.
Minor grammatical fixes.
| -rw-r--r-- | docs/reference/node-startup-controller/test-test-environment-setup.xml | 12 |
1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/docs/reference/node-startup-controller/test-test-environment-setup.xml b/docs/reference/node-startup-controller/test-test-environment-setup.xml index f27266a..f624d67 100644 --- a/docs/reference/node-startup-controller/test-test-environment-setup.xml +++ b/docs/reference/node-startup-controller/test-test-environment-setup.xml @@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ </para> <programlisting>dlt-daemon -d</programlisting> <para> - Afterwards, the <literal>dlt-receive</literal> can be used to forward all - messages logged via the DLT to a specific file. The following command attaches + Afterwards, the <literal>dlt-receive</literal> tool can be used to forward all + messages logged via DLT to a specific file. The following command attaches the <literal>dlt-receive</literal> tool to the <literal>dlt-daemon</literal> running on the same machine and writes all output to <literal>/tmp/dlt.log</literal>: @@ -56,10 +56,10 @@ </para> <programlisting>12 2012/08/01 10:30:32.247913 17066086 006 ECU1 <emphasis role="bold">NSC- CTRL</emphasis> log info V 1 <emphasis role="bold">[Active state of unit "node-startup-controller.service" changed to active]</emphasis></programlisting> <para> - The fields we are interested for debugging and testing in are the Apid - (Application ID), Ctid (Context ID) and the Payload. The test cases described - in the following chapters include the exact log values for these fields needed - to verify the correctness of behaviour of the Node Startup Controller. + The fields relevant to debugging and testing in are the Apid (Application ID), Ctid + (Context ID) and the Payload. The test cases described in the following chapters + include the exact log values for these fields needed to verify the the Node Startup + Controller is behaving correctly. </para> </refsect1> </refentry> |