* Review topics; several significantly reworded

* Fix validation errors

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
index 45406bde..84820d1c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
@@ -1,12 +1,11 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-
       type="topic" id="backup-frequency">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
-    <desc>How often and when to backup your files.</desc>
+    <desc>Learn how often your should backup your important files to make sure that they're safe.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-30" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany.antopolski@gmail.com</email>
@@ -20,12 +19,13 @@
 
 <title>Frequency of backups</title>
 
-<p>How often you make backups will depend on the type of data to be backed up. For example, if you are running a network environment 
-with critical data stored on your servers, then even nightly backups may not be enough.</p>
+<p>How often you make backups will depend on the type of files to be backed up 
+and how important they are. For example, if you have the accounts for your 
+business stored on your computer, then even weekly backups may not be enough to 
+make sure you don't lose anything important.</p>
 
-<p>
-On the other hand, if you are backing up the data on your home computer then you may need to factor in a few things, such as:
-</p>
+<p>If you are backing-up files on your home computer, you may need to factor in 
+things like:</p>
 
 <list style="compact">
 <item><p>The amount of time you spend on the computer.</p></item>
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ On the other hand, if you are backing up the data on your home computer then you
 </list>
 
 <p>
-If the data you want to back up is lower priority or subject to few changes like music, e-mails and family photos, then 
+If the data you want to back up is lower priority or subject to few changes (like music, e-mails and family photos), then 
 weekly or even monthly backups may suffice. However, if you happen to be in the middle of a tax audit, more frequent backups may be necessary.
 </p>