revised backup-check.page and marked file as candidate.

1 files changed, 16 insertions, 19 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
index bba99433..16b28e7c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
     <desc>Verify your backup was successful.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2010-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
@@ -15,26 +15,23 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>Check your backup</title>
-  <p>
-    After you have backed up your files, you should make sure that the backup was successful.  
-   </p>
-   <p>
-   A file integrity check is not done on a copy/move operation.  This means if you are copying files to other drives/media, 
-it is not easy to verify data integrity or to single out files that have failed. 
-   </p>
-    <p>
-    You can do a check by looking through the copied files and directories in the destination media. By opening 
-and checking the copied files, you can see whether the files you check copied successfully.
-    </p>
+
+  <p>After you have backed up your files, you should make sure that the 
+backup was successful.</p>
+
+   <p>When you use the file manager to copy or move files, the 
+computer checks to make sure that all of the data transferred correctly.  
+However, if you are transferring data that is very important to you, 
+you may want to perform additional checks to confirm that your 
+data has been transferred properly.</p>
+
+  <p>You can do an extra check by looking through the copied files 
+and directories in the destination media. By checking for the files and folders
+that you transferred, you can have extra confidence that the process was
+successful.</p>
     
-    <note style="tip"><p>If you find that you do regular backups of large amounts of data, you may find it easier to 
+  <note style="tip"><p>If you find that you do regular backups of large amounts of data, you may find it easier to 
 use a dedicated backup program, such as <app>Déjà Dup</app>. Such a program is more powerful and more reliable than 
 just copying and pasting data.</p></note>
-    
-  <comment>
-   <cite date="2010-06-29" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list@gnome.org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
-   <p>Explain why backups should be tested.</p>
-   <p>Give methods for checking backups, like MD5sum.</p>
-  </comment>
 
 </page>