files-copy, files-delete updates

2 files changed, 25 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-copy.page b/gnome-help/C/files-copy.page
index 44876f54..9e086bc5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-copy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-copy.page
@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="files"/>
     <desc>Copy or move items to a new folder.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.92" version="0.2" date="2012-09-15" status="review"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Cristopher Thomas</name>
       <email>crisnoh@gmail.com</email>
@@ -16,6 +17,10 @@
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany.antopolski@gmail.com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca@gmail.com</email>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
@@ -36,12 +41,12 @@
 <steps ui:expanded="no">
 <title>Copy and paste files</title>
 <item><p>Select the file you want to copy by clicking on it once.</p></item>
-<item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Copy</gui></guiseq>, or press
+<item><p>Right-click and pick <gui>Copy</gui>, or press
  <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>C</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
 <item><p>Navigate to another folder, where you want to put the copy of the
  file.</p></item>
-<item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Paste</gui></guiseq> to finish
- copying the file, or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>V</key></keyseq>. There
+<item><p>Click the gear icon and pick <gui>Paste</gui> to finish copying the
+ file, or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>V</key></keyseq>. There
  will now be a copy of the file in the original folder and the other
  folder.</p></item>
 </steps>
@@ -49,11 +54,11 @@
 <steps ui:expanded="no">
 <title>Cut and paste files to move them</title>
 <item><p>Select the file you want to move by clicking on it once.</p></item>
-<item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Cut</gui></guiseq>, or press
+<item><p>Right-click and pick <gui>Cut</gui>, or press
  <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>X</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
 <item><p>Navigate to another folder, where you want to move the file.</p></item>
-<item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Paste</gui></guiseq> to finish moving
- the file, or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>V</key></keyseq>. The file will
+<item><p>Click the gear icon and pick <gui>Paste</gui> to finish moving the
+ file, or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>V</key></keyseq>. The file will
  be taken out of its original folder and moved to the other folder.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
@@ -61,9 +66,9 @@
 <title>Drag files to copy or move</title>
 <item><p>Open the file manager and go to the folder which contains the file you
  want to copy.</p></item>
-<item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>File</gui><gui>New Window</gui></guiseq> (or press
- <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>N</key></keyseq>) to open a second window. In the
- new window, navigate to the folder where you want to move or copy the file.
+<item><p>Click <gui>Files</gui> in the top bar, select <gui>New Window</gui> (or
+ press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>N</key></keyseq>) to open a second window. In
+ the new window, navigate to the folder where you want to move or copy the file.
  </p></item>
 <item>
  <p>Click and drag the file from one window to another. This will
@@ -85,4 +90,4 @@
  </link>.</p>
 </note>
 
-</page>
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+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-delete.page b/gnome-help/C/files-delete.page
index d7cbeb9c..702343e7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-delete.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-delete.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="files-recover"/>
     <desc>Remove files or folders you no longer need.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.92" version="0.2" date="2012-09-16" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Cristopher Thomas</name>
@@ -22,6 +22,10 @@
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email>jwcampbell@gmail.com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca@gmail.com</email>
+    </credit>
   </info>
 
 <title>Delete files and folders</title>
@@ -62,9 +66,9 @@
   <note style="tip"><p>If you frequently need to delete files without using the
   trash (for example, if you often work with sensitive data), you can add a
   <gui>Delete</gui> entry to the right-click menu for files and folders.
-  Click <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Preferences</gui></guiseq> and select the
-  <gui>Behavior</gui> tab. Select <gui>Include a Delete command that bypasses
-  Trash</gui>.</p></note>
+  Click <gui>Files</gui> in the top bar, pick <gui>Preferences</gui> and select
+  the <gui>Behavior</gui> tab. Select <gui>Include a Delete command that
+  bypasses Trash</gui>.</p></note>
 
   <note><p>Deleted files on a <link xref="files#removable">removable device
   </link> may not be visible on other operating systems, such Windows or Mac
@@ -72,4 +76,4 @@
   back into your computer.</p></note>
 
   </section>
-</page>
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+</page>