Fixed a few old links and quaint verbiage

2006-12-09  Joachim Noreiko  <jnoreiko@yahoo.com>

	* data/templates/gnome-app-template.xml:
    Fixed a few old links and quaint verbiage

1 files changed, 31 insertions, 39 deletions

diff --git a/data/templates/gnome-app-template.xml b/data/templates/gnome-app-template.xml
index 1314ce0..4fc0cde 100644
--- a/data/templates/gnome-app-template.xml
+++ b/data/templates/gnome-app-template.xml
@@ -36,25 +36,17 @@
 -->
 <!-- =============Document Header ============================= -->
 <article id="index" lang="en">
-<!-- please do not change the id; for translations, change lang to -->
-<!-- appropriate code -->
   <articleinfo> 
     <title>&app; Manual</title>       
 
     <copyright> 
-      <year>2000</year> 
-      <year>2001</year> 
-      <holder>DOCUMENTATION WRITER 2</holder> 
+      <year>2006</year> 
+      <holder>GNOME Documentation Project</holder> 
     </copyright> 
-    <copyright> 
-      <year>1999</year> 
-      <year>2000</year> 
-      <holder>DOCUMENTATION WRITER 1</holder> 
-    </copyright>
 
-<!-- An address can be added to the publisher information. -->
+    <!-- An address can be added to the publisher information. -->
     <publisher role="maintainer"> 
-      <publishername> GNOME Documentation Project </publishername> 
+      <publishername>GNOME Documentation Project</publishername> 
     </publisher> 
 
 	  <xi:include href="legal.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -64,24 +56,24 @@
 
     <authorgroup> 
       <author> 
-		<firstname>Documentation</firstname> 
-		<surname>Writer 2</surname> 
-		<affiliation> 
-	  		<orgname>GNOME Documentation Project</orgname> 
-	  		<!-- The email address of the author is optional and is commented out by default. 
-			<address> <email>doc-writer2@gnome.org</email> </address> 
-			-->
-		</affiliation> 
+    		<firstname>Documentation</firstname> 
+    		<surname>Writer 2</surname> 
+    		<affiliation> 
+    	  		<orgname>GNOME Documentation Project</orgname> 
+    	  		<!-- The email address of the author is optional and is commented out by default. 
+    			<address> <email>doc-writer2@gnome.org</email> </address> 
+    			-->
+    		</affiliation> 
       </author> 
       <author> 
-		<firstname>Documentation</firstname> 
-		<surname>Writer 1</surname> 
-		<affiliation> 
-	  		<orgname>GNOME Documentation Project</orgname> 
-	  		<!-- The email address of the author is optional and is commented out by default. 
-			<address> <email>doc-writer2@gnome.org</email> </address> 
-			-->
-		</affiliation> 
+    		<firstname>Documentation</firstname> 
+    		<surname>Writer 1</surname> 
+    		<affiliation> 
+    	  		<orgname>GNOME Documentation Project</orgname> 
+    	  		<!-- The email address of the author is optional and is commented out by default. 
+    			<address> <email>doc-writer2@gnome.org</email> </address> 
+    			-->
+    		</affiliation> 
       </author> 
     </authorgroup>
     
@@ -129,8 +121,8 @@
     <legalnotice> 
       <title>Feedback</title> 
       <para>To report a bug or make a suggestion regarding the &app; application or
-      this manual, follow the directions in the <ulink url="ghelp:gnome-feedback"
-	  type="help">GNOME Feedback Page</ulink>. 
+      this manual, follow the directions in the 
+      <ulink url="ghelp:user-guide?feedback-bugs" type="help">Feedback section of the GNOME User Guide</ulink>. 
       </para>
 <!-- Translators may also add here feedback address for translations -->
     </legalnotice> 
@@ -149,7 +141,7 @@
      the application is and what it does. -->
   <sect1 id="myapp-introduction"> 
     <title>Introduction</title> 
-    <para>The &app; application enables you to view image files. 
+    <para>Use &app; to view image files. 
     &app; provides the following features:</para> 
     <itemizedlist> 
       <listitem> 
@@ -208,7 +200,7 @@
 
     <sect2 id="myapp-start">
     <title>Starting &app;</title>
-    <para>You can start <application>&app;</application> in the following ways:
+    <para>You can start &app; in the following ways:
     </para> 
     <variablelist>
     	<varlistentry>
@@ -224,7 +216,7 @@
     	<varlistentry>
     		<term>Command line</term>
     		<listitem>
-    		<para>To start <application>&app;</application> from a command line, type the following command, 
+    		<para>To start &app; from a command line, type the following command, 
     		then press <keycap>Return</keycap>:</para>
     		<para> 
 			<command>myapp</command> 
@@ -242,7 +234,7 @@
 
     <sect2 id="myapp-when-start">
     <title>When You Start &app;</title>
-    <para>When you start <application>&app;</application>, the following window is displayed.</para>
+    <para>When you start &app;, the following window is displayed.</para>
 
     <!-- ==== Figure ==== -->
       <figure id="mainwindow-fig"> 
@@ -277,7 +269,7 @@
 	<term>Menubar. </term>
 	<listitem>
 	<para>The menus on the menubar contain all of the commands you need to work with files in 
-	<application>&app;</application>.</para>
+	&app;.</para>
 	</listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
 	<varlistentry>
@@ -289,7 +281,7 @@
 	<varlistentry>
 	<term>Statusbar. </term>
 	<listitem>
-	<para>The statusbar displays information about current <application>&app;</application> 
+	<para>The statusbar displays information about current &app; 
 	activity and contextual information about the menu items. </para>
 	</listitem>
 	</varlistentry>
@@ -466,10 +458,10 @@
   <!-- ============= Customization ============================= -->
   <!-- Use this section to describe how to customize the application. -->
   <sect1 id="myapp-prefs"> 
-    <title>Settings</title> 
+    <title>Preferences</title> 
     <para>To configure &app;, choose 
       <menuchoice> 
-	<guimenu>Settings</guimenu> 
+	<guimenu>Edit</guimenu> 
 	<guimenuitem>Preferences</guimenuitem> 
       </menuchoice>. The 
       <guilabel>Preferences</guilabel> dialog contains the following tabbed
@@ -485,7 +477,7 @@
       </listitem> 
     </itemizedlist>
 <!-- =============== Customization Subsection ================ -->
-<!-- Use a new section to describe different tabbed sections on the Settings or Preferences
+<!-- Use a new section to describe different tabbed sections on the Preferences
 	     dialog. -->
     <sect2 id="myapp-prefs-display"> 
       <title>Display</title>