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authorKarl Berry <karl@gnu.org>2007-04-11 20:57:52 +0000
committerKarl Berry <karl@gnu.org>2007-04-11 20:57:52 +0000
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@@ -41,10 +41,9 @@ Since that time, we have learned about certain common misunderstandings
that different wording could help avoid. Footnotes added in 1993 help
clarify these points.
-For up-to-date information about the available GNU software, please
-see @uref{http://www.gnu.org}. For software tasks to work on, see
-@uref{http://savannah.gnu.org/projects/tasklist}. For other ways to
-contribute, see @uref{http://www.gnu.org/help}.
+For up-to-date information about available GNU software, please see
+our web site, @uref{http://www.gnu.org}. For software tasks and other
+ways to contribute, see @uref{http://www.gnu.org/help}.
@end quotation
@unnumberedsec What's GNU? Gnu's Not Unix!
@@ -503,10 +502,11 @@ The sale of teaching, hand-holding and maintenance services could also
employ programmers.
People with new ideas could distribute programs as
-freeware@footnote{Subsequently we have learned to distinguish between
-"free software" and "freeware". The term "freeware" means software
-you are free to redistribute, but usually you are not free to study
-and change the source code, so most of it is not free software. See
+freeware@footnote{Subsequently we have discovered the need to
+distinguish between ``free software'' and ``freeware''. The term
+``freeware'' means software you are free to redistribute, but usually
+you are not free to study and change the source code, so most of it is
+not free software. See
@uref{http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html} for more
explanation.}, asking for donations from satisfied users, or selling
hand-holding services. I have met people who are already working this