From df7593dd91f21150a48a4faa01dcf9209fc902b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Karl Berry Date: Wed, 11 Apr 2007 20:57:52 +0000 Subject: wording for 8.5x11 --- man/gnu.texi | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) (limited to 'man/gnu.texi') diff --git a/man/gnu.texi b/man/gnu.texi index 3b8a8e17f0a..1cf85f41c3c 100644 --- a/man/gnu.texi +++ b/man/gnu.texi @@ -41,10 +41,9 @@ Since that time, we have learned about certain common misunderstandings that different wording could help avoid. Footnotes added in 1993 help clarify these points. -For up-to-date information about the available GNU software, please -see @uref{http://www.gnu.org}. For software tasks to work on, see -@uref{http://savannah.gnu.org/projects/tasklist}. For other ways to -contribute, see @uref{http://www.gnu.org/help}. +For up-to-date information about available GNU software, please see +our web site, @uref{http://www.gnu.org}. For software tasks and other +ways to contribute, see @uref{http://www.gnu.org/help}. @end quotation @unnumberedsec What's GNU? Gnu's Not Unix! @@ -503,10 +502,11 @@ The sale of teaching, hand-holding and maintenance services could also employ programmers. People with new ideas could distribute programs as -freeware@footnote{Subsequently we have learned to distinguish between -"free software" and "freeware". The term "freeware" means software -you are free to redistribute, but usually you are not free to study -and change the source code, so most of it is not free software. See +freeware@footnote{Subsequently we have discovered the need to +distinguish between ``free software'' and ``freeware''. The term +``freeware'' means software you are free to redistribute, but usually +you are not free to study and change the source code, so most of it is +not free software. See @uref{http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html} for more explanation.}, asking for donations from satisfied users, or selling hand-holding services. I have met people who are already working this -- cgit v1.2.1