some language changes and fixes

committed by Noirin Plunkett


git-svn-id: https://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/httpd/httpd/trunk@239255 13f79535-47bb-0310-9956-ffa450edef68

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/docs/manual/install.xml b/docs/manual/install.xml
index 6541d29386..619d84fc82 100644
--- a/docs/manual/install.xml
+++ b/docs/manual/install.xml
@@ -152,14 +152,15 @@
       <dd>For some of the support scripts like <program>
       apxs</program> or <program>dbmmanage</program> (which are
       written in Perl) the Perl 5 interpreter is required (versions
-      5.003 or newer are sufficient). If no such interpreter is found by
-      the <program>configure</program> script there is no harm. Of course, you
-      still can build and install Apache 2.0. Only those support scripts
-      cannot be used. If you have multiple Perl interpreters
-      installed (perhaps a Perl 4 from the vendor and a Perl 5 from
-      your own), then it is recommended to use the <code>--with-perl</code>
-      option (see below) to make sure the correct one is selected
-      by <program>configure</program>.</dd>
+      5.003 or newer are sufficient). If you have multiple Perl 
+      interpreters (for example, a systemwide install of Perl 4, and 
+      your own install of Perl 5), you are advised to use the 
+      <code>--with-perl</code> option (see below) to make sure the 
+      correct one is used by <program>configure</program>.
+      If no Perl 5 interpreter is found by the 
+      <program>configure</program> script, you will not be able to use 
+      the affected support scripts. Of course, you will still be able to 
+      build and use Apache 2.0.</dd>
     </dl>
 </section>