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author | Stephen Wadeley <swadeley@redhat.com> | 2013-10-31 10:39:16 +0100 |
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committer | Jiří Klimeš <jklimes@redhat.com> | 2013-10-31 13:24:22 +0100 |
commit | 52ad4ec577e0b306e150b4d8d4e299965f81d43d (patch) | |
tree | bd740f297813440cafc0efa5b41cacc4e4e7d639 /man/nmcli-examples.xml | |
parent | b752252fc4a0507ccd1f3a731034ee24aa047ae5 (diff) | |
download | NetworkManager-52ad4ec577e0b306e150b4d8d4e299965f81d43d.tar.gz |
man: some improvements to language and style in nmcli-examples manual page
Signed-off-by: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley@redhat.com>
Diffstat (limited to 'man/nmcli-examples.xml')
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1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/man/nmcli-examples.xml b/man/nmcli-examples.xml index c45d69a995..20f9f9fb57 100644 --- a/man/nmcli-examples.xml +++ b/man/nmcli-examples.xml @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ org.freedesktop.NetworkManager.settings.modify.hostname auth </example> <para> This command shows configured polkit permissions for various NetworkManager - operation. These permissions or actions (using polkit language) are configured + operations. These permissions or actions (using polkit language) are configured by a system administrator and are not meant to be changed by users. The usual place for the polkit configuration is /usr/share/polkit-1/actions/org.freedesktop.NetworkManager.policy. <emphasis>pkaction</emphasis> command can display description for polkit actions. @@ -170,9 +170,9 @@ $ nmcli -p con show conf my-con-em1 </programlisting> </example> <para> - The first command adds an ethernet connection named <emphasis>my-con-em1</emphasis> + The first command adds an Ethernet connection named <emphasis>my-con-em1</emphasis> that is bound to interface name <emphasis>em1</emphasis>. The connection is configured - with static IP addresses. The second and third commands modifies DNS parameters of the + with static IP addresses. The second and third commands modify DNS parameters of the new connection profile. Using the last <emphasis>con show configured</emphasis> the connection is displayed so that all parameters can be reviewed. </para> @@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ nmcli ipv4.addresses> desc === [addresses] === [setting description] -Array of IPv4 address structures. Each IPv4 address structure is composed of 3 32-bit values; the first being the IPv4 address (network byte order), the second the prefix (1 - 32), and last the IPv4 gateway (network byte order). The gateway may be left as 0 if no gateway exists for that subnet. For the 'auto' method, given IP addresses are appended to those returned by automatic configuration. Addresses cannot be used with the 'shared', 'link-local', or 'disabled' methods as addressing is either automatic or disabled with these methods. +Array of IPv4 address structures. Each IPv4 address structure is composed of three 32-bit values; the first being the IPv4 address (network byte order), the second the prefix (1 - 32), and last the IPv4 gateway (network byte order). The gateway may be left as 0 if no gateway exists for that subnet. For the 'auto' method, given IP addresses are appended to those returned by automatic configuration. Addresses cannot be used with the 'shared', 'link-local', or 'disabled' methods as addressing is either automatic or disabled with these methods. [nmcli description] Enter a list of IPv4 addresses formatted as: @@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ nmcli> quit </example> <para> Example session in the nmcli interactive connection editor. - The scenario creates an ethernet connection (configuration) with static addressing (IPs and DNS). + The scenario creates an Ethernet connection (configuration) with static addressing (IPs and DNS). </para> <example><title>nmcli usage in a NetworkManager dispatcher script to make ethernet/Wi-Fi mutually exclusive</title> |