More NEWS improvements.

1 files changed, 16 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/NEWS b/NEWS
index c9234fac..dc1df781 100644
--- a/NEWS
+++ b/NEWS
@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@ Changes since 3.1.0:
 
   BUG FIXES:
 
-    - Fix a failure to remove our partial-transfer temp file when interrupted
-      (and not saving partial files).
+    - Fixed a failure to remove the partial-transfer temp file when interrupted
+      (and rsync is not saving the partial files).
 
-    - Change the chown/group/xattr-set order to avoid losing some
-      security-related xattr info (that is cleared on chown).
+    - Changed the chown/group/xattr-set order to avoid losing some security-
+      related xattr info (that would get cleared by a chown).
 
     - Fixed a bug in the early daemon protocol where a timeout failed to be
       honored (e.g. if the remote side fails to send us the initial protocol
@@ -17,18 +17,19 @@ Changes since 3.1.0:
     - Fixed unintended inclusion of commas in file numbers in the daemon log.
 
     - We once again send the 'f' sub-flag (of -e) to the server side so it
-      knows that we can handle incremental-recusion directory errors properly.
+      knows that we can handle incremental-recursion directory errors properly
+      in older protocols.
 
-    - Fixed an issue with too-agressive keep-alive messages causing a problem
+    - Fixed an issue with too-aggressive keep-alive messages causing a problem
       for older rsync versions early in the transfer.
 
-    - Fix incorrect --dry-run backup-directory-creation messages when the
-      backup dir is not an absolute path.
+    - Fixed an incorrect message about backup-directory-creation when using
+      --dry-run and the backup dir is not an absolute path.
 
-    - Fix a bug where a failed deletion might not affect the exit code.
+    - Fixed a bug where a failed deletion might not affect the exit code.
 
-    - Fix a bug that caused a failure when combining --delete-missing-args with
-      --xattrs and/or --acls.
+    - Fixed a bug that caused a failure when combining --delete-missing-args
+      with --xattrs and/or --acls.
 
     - Fixed an itemize bug that affected the combo of --link-dest, -X, and -n.
 
@@ -37,15 +38,15 @@ Changes since 3.1.0:
 
     - Improve chunked xattr reading for OS X.
 
-    - Remove an attempted hard-link xattr optimization that was causing a
+    - Removed an attempted hard-link xattr optimization that was causing a
       transfer failure.  (If you need to interact with an rsync 3.1.0 using
       --hard-links & --xattrs, you can specify --protocol=30.)
 
-    - Return an error if a buffer overflows in do_mknod().
+    - We now generate a better error if the buffer overflows in do_mknod().
 
     - Fixed a problem reading more than 16 ACLs on some OSes.
 
-    - Try to speed up cygwin by switching back to using socketpair "pipes".
+    - Switched Cygwin back to using socketpair "pipes" to try to speed it up.
 
     - Added knowledge of a few new options to rrsync.
 
@@ -53,5 +54,5 @@ Changes since 3.1.0:
 
     - Added the support/rsync-no-vanished wrapper script.
 
-    - Have configure more prominently mention when we failed to find yodl (in
+    - Made configure more prominently mention when we failed to find yodl (in
       case the user wants to be able to generate manpages from *.yo files).