[ios, osx] Copyedited installation documentation

Copyedited installation documentation to make sense to less experienced Xcode users, ensure consistency, remove redundant language, and reflect recent build changes.

1 files changed, 33 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/platform/ios/docs/pod-README.md b/platform/ios/docs/pod-README.md
index c3d6844a59..1633c7d126 100644
--- a/platform/ios/docs/pod-README.md
+++ b/platform/ios/docs/pod-README.md
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ The Mapbox iOS SDK may be installed as either a dynamic framework or a static fr
 
 This is the recommended workflow for manually integrating the SDK into an application targeting iOS 8 and above:
 
-1. Open the project editor and select your application target. Drag `Mapbox.framework` from the `dynamic` folder into the “Embedded Binaries” section of the General tab. (Don’t drag it into the “Linked Frameworks and Libraries” section; Xcode will add it there automatically.) In the sheet that appears, make sure “Copy items if needed” is checked, then click Finish.
+1. Open the project editor, select your application target, then go to the General tab. Drag Mapbox.framework from the `dynamic` folder into the “Embedded Binaries” section. (Don’t drag it into the “Linked Frameworks and Libraries” section; Xcode will add it there automatically.) In the sheet that appears, make sure “Copy items if needed” is checked, then click Finish.
 
 1. In the Build Phases tab, click the + button at the top and select “New Run Script Phase”. Enter the following code into the script text field:
 
@@ -33,52 +33,62 @@ bash "${BUILT_PRODUCTS_DIR}/${FRAMEWORKS_FOLDER_PATH}/Mapbox.framework/strip-fra
 
 If your application targets iOS 7.x, you’ll need to install the static framework instead:
 
-1. Drag the Mapbox.bundle and Mapbox.framework files in `static` into the Project navigator, checking "Copy items if needed". It should happen automatically, but ensure that:
-   
-   - `Mapbox.framework` is listed in your `Link Binary With Libraries` build phase.
-   - Your *Framework Search Paths* (`FRAMEWORK_SEARCH_PATHS`) build setting includes the directory that contains `Mapbox.framework`. For most projects, the default value of `$(inherited) $(PROJECT_DIR)` should be sufficient.  
-   - `Mapbox.bundle` is in your target's *Copy Bundle Resources* build phase.
+1. Drag Mapbox.bundle and Mapbox.framework from the `static` folder into the Project navigator. In the sheet that appears, make sure “Copy items if needed” is checked, then click Finish. Open the project editor and select your application target to verify that the following changes occurred automatically:
 
-1. **Optional** As [noted in the documentation](https://www.mapbox.com/ios-sdk/#telemetry_opt_out) you may use the provided Settings.bundle to provide a Telemetry opt out for users. To use the provided file, drag the `Settings.bundle` file from the release root folder into the Project navigator, checking "Copy items if needed". It should happen automatically, but ensure that:
-
-   - `Settings.bundle` is in your target's *Copy Bundle Resources* build phase. 
+   - In the General tab, Mapbox.framework is listed in the “Linked Frameworks and Libraries” section.
+   - In the Build Settings tab, the “Framework Search Paths” (`FRAMEWORK_SEARCH_PATHS`) build setting includes the directory that contains Mapbox.framework. For most projects, the default value of `$(inherited) $(PROJECT_DIR)` should be sufficient.
+   - In the Build Phases tab, Mapbox.bundle is listed in the “Copy Bundle Resources” build phase.
 
 1. Add the following Cocoa Touch frameworks and libraries to the “Linked Frameworks and Libraries” section:
 
-   - `GLKit.framework`
-   - `ImageIO.framework`
-   - `MobileCoreServices.framework`
-   - `QuartzCore.framework`
-   - `SystemConfiguration.framework`
-   - `libc++.tbd`
-   - `libsqlite3.tbd`
-   - `libz.tbd`
+   - GLKit.framework
+   - ImageIO.framework
+   - MobileCoreServices.framework
+   - QuartzCore.framework
+   - SystemConfiguration.framework
+   - libc++.tbd
+   - libsqlite3.tbd
+   - libz.tbd
 
 {{/STATIC}}
 
 ## Configuration
 
-1. Mapbox vector tiles require a Mapbox account and API access token. In the project editor, select the application target. In the Info tab, set `MGLMapboxAccessToken` to your access token. You can obtain one from the [Mapbox account page](https://www.mapbox.com/studio/account/tokens/).
+1. Mapbox vector tiles require a Mapbox account and API access token. In the project editor, select the application target, then go to the Info tab. Under the “Custom iOS Target Properties” section, set `MGLMapboxAccessToken` to your access token. You can obtain an access token from the [Mapbox account page](https://www.mapbox.com/studio/account/tokens/).
+
+1. In order to show the user’s current location on the map, the SDK must ask for the user’s permission to access Location Services. Go to the Info tab of the project editor. If your application supports iOS 7, set the `NSLocationUsageDescription` key to a message that explains to the user what their location is used for. If your application supports iOS 8 and above, set the `NSLocationAlwaysUsageDescription` and/or `NSLocationWhenInUseUsageDescription` key to this message instead.
 
-1. In order to show the user’s position on the map, you must first ask for their permission. In iOS 8 and above, this is accomplished by creating and setting the `NSLocationAlwaysUsageDescription` and/or `NSLocationWhenInUseUsageDescription` key in the `Info.plist` file.
+1. _(Optional)_ Mapbox Telemetry is a [powerful location analytics platform](https://www.mapbox.com/telemetry/) included in this SDK. By default, anonymized location and usage data is sent to Mapbox whenever the host application causes it to be gathered. This SDK provides users with a way to individually opt out of Mapbox Telemetry. You can also add this opt-out setting to your application’s Settings screen using a Settings bundle. An example Settings.bundle is provided with this SDK; drag it into the Project navigator, checking “Copy items if needed” when prompted. In the project editor, verify that the following change occurred automatically:
 
-1. _(Optional)_ Mapbox Telemetry is a <a href="https://www.mapbox.com/telemetry/">powerful location analytics platform</a> included in this SDK. By default, anonymized location and usage data is sent to Mapbox whenever the host application causes it to be gathered. This SDK provides users with a way to individually opt out of Mapbox Telemetry. You can also add this opt-out setting to your application’s Settings screen, using the provided `Settings.bundle`.
+   - In the General tab, Settings.bundle is listed in the “Copy Bundle Resources” build phase.
 
 ## Usage
 
-In a XIB or storyboard, add a Custom View and set its custom class to `MGLMapView`. If you need to manipulate the map view programmatically, import the Mapbox module in your view controller’s implementation file:
+In a storyboard or XIB, add a view to your view controller. (Drag View from the Object library to the View Controller scene on the Interface Builder canvas.) In the Identity inspector, set the view’s custom class to `MGLMapView`. If you need to manipulate the map view programmatically:
+
+1. Switch to the Assistant Editor.
+1. Import the `Mapbox` module.
+1. Connect the map view to a new outlet in your view controller class. (Control-drag from the map view in Interface Builder to a valid location in your view controller implementation.) The resulting outlet declaration should look something like this:
 
 ```objc
 // ViewController.m
 @import Mapbox;
+
+@interface ViewController : UIViewController
+
+@property (strong) IBOutlet MGLMapView *mapView;
+
+@end
 ```
 
 ```swift
 // ViewController.swift
 import Mapbox
-```
 
-Then switch to the Assistant Editor and create an outlet to the map view. (Control-drag from the map view in Interface Builder to a valid location in your view controller implementation.)
+class ViewController: UIViewController {
+    @IBOutlet var mapView: MGLMapView!
+}
+```
 
 Full API documentation is included in this package, within the `documentation` folder. For more details, read “[First steps with the Mapbox iOS SDK](https://www.mapbox.com/help/first-steps-ios-sdk/)” and consult the [online examples](https://www.mapbox.com/ios-sdk/examples/).