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| author | Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us> | 2009-06-17 21:58:49 +0000 |
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| committer | Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us> | 2009-06-17 21:58:49 +0000 |
| commit | c30446b9c901b357f9a7b859c51bee5740ac313f (patch) | |
| tree | d141c00dcfd93cea53c2497983542e807399681c /doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml | |
| parent | e8d78d35f45602767f8b2dc5893b9b768b777302 (diff) | |
| download | postgresql-c30446b9c901b357f9a7b859c51bee5740ac313f.tar.gz | |
Proofreading for Bruce's recent round of documentation proofreading.
Most of those changes were good, but some not so good ...
Diffstat (limited to 'doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml')
| -rw-r--r-- | doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml | 6 |
1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml index 305ce9cc57..5ae2f59bae 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml,v 1.58 2009/04/27 16:27:35 momjian Exp $ --> +<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml,v 1.59 2009/06/17 21:58:48 tgl Exp $ --> <chapter id="tutorial-advanced"> <title>Advanced Features</title> @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ <para> This chapter will on occasion refer to examples found in <xref linkend="tutorial-sql"> to change or improve them, so it will be - good if you have read that chapter. Some examples from + useful to have read that chapter. Some examples from this chapter can also be found in <filename>advanced.sql</filename> in the tutorial directory. This file also contains some sample data to load, which is not @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ UPDATE branches SET balance = balance + 100.00 </para> <para> - The details of these commands are not important; the important + The details of these commands are not important here; the important point is that there are several separate updates involved to accomplish this rather simple operation. Our bank's officers will want to be assured that either all these updates happen, or none of them happen. |