Update bluetooth.page

Line 36: Replace "input" with "other"
Line 38: Add For "simplicity purposes "Bluetooth" will 
be referred to as "BT" throughout the rest of this document"
Line 43: Add "it" grammar

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
index 993cab0e..f6b44de8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
@@ -16,7 +16,10 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm@gnome.org</email>
     </credit>
-
+    <credit type="Editor">
+      <name>Klein Kravis</name>
+      <email>kleinkravis44@outlook.com</email>
+    </credit>  
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
     <desc>Connect to devices over Bluetooth to transfer files or use
@@ -27,14 +30,15 @@
 
 <p>Bluetooth is a wireless protocol that allows you to connect many different
 types of devices to your computer. Bluetooth is commonly used for headsets
-and input devices like mice and keyboards. You can also use Bluetooth to
+and other devices like mice and keyboards. You can also use Bluetooth to
 <link xref="bluetooth-send-file">send files between devices</link>, such as
-from your computer to your cell phone.</p>
+from your computer to your cell phone. For simplicity purposes "Bluetooth" will 
+be referred to as "BT" throughout the rest of this document</p>
 
 <comment>
 <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
 <p>Things to improve: The BT settings has a "Browse Files" button for devices.
-We only cover push file transfers. Might also be worth mentioning something
+We only cover push file transfers. It Might also be worth mentioning something
 on receiving files when doing push from another device.</p>
 <p>We don't have explicit pages for input devices. Might be worth a topic like
 "Connect a BT mouse or keyboard", linked under Mouse, Keyboard, and BT.</p>