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authorKlein Kravis <kleinkravis44@outlook.com>2020-05-23 00:41:44 +0000
committerPetr Kovar <pkovar@redhat.com>2021-05-05 22:50:27 +0200
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Update backup-how.page
Line 31: Replaced "some other" with "another" former seemed dismissive Line 45: Replaced "another computer on the network" with "a online cloud service", more people have cloud storage. Many people only own one computer. Line 54: DVD/CD is mostly obsolete, replaced with "USB Drive"
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
index bb6d064a..c80a70e4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
@@ -20,10 +20,15 @@
<name>Michael Hill</name>
<email>mdhillca@gmail.com</email>
</credit>
-
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Klein Kravis</name>
+ <email>kleinkravis44@outlook.com</email>
+ <years>2020</years>
+ </credit>
+
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
- <desc>Use Déjà Dup (or some other backup application) to make copies of
+ <desc>Use Déjà Dup (or another backup application) to make copies of
your valuable files and settings to protect against loss.</desc>
</info>
@@ -37,8 +42,8 @@
your preferences for the backup, as well as how to restore your data.</p>
<p>An alternative option is to <link xref="files-copy">copy your files</link>
- to a safe location, such as an external hard drive, another computer on the
- network, or a USB drive. Your <link xref="backup-thinkabout">personal files</link>
+ to a safe location, such as an external hard drive, a online storage service,
+ or a USB drive. Your <link xref="backup-thinkabout">personal files</link>
and settings are usually in your Home folder, so you can copy them from there.</p>
<p>The amount of data you can back up is limited by the size of the storage
@@ -46,7 +51,7 @@
entire Home folder with the following exceptions:</p>
<list>
- <item><p>Files that are already backed up somewhere else, such as to a CD, DVD,
+ <item><p>Files that are already backed up somewhere else, such as to a USB drive,
or other removable media.</p></item>
<item><p>Files that you can recreate easily. For example, if you are a
programmer, you do not have to back up the files that get produced when you