Settings refresh: net-manual, -wired-connect

2 files changed, 24 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
index 32d7e0fb..128fe00d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-11" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-03-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -36,23 +37,31 @@
   <steps>
     <title>To manually set your network settings:</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Network</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>In the left pane, select the network connection that you want to set
       up manually. If you plug in to the network with a cable, click
-      <gui>Wired</gui>, then click the
-      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span its:translate="yes">settings</span></media> button in the lower right corner of
-      the panel. For a <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> connection, the 
-      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
-      button will be located next to the active network.</p>
+      <gui>Network</gui>. Otherwise click <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>.</p>
       <p>Make sure that your wireless card is turned on or a network cable is
       plugged in.</p>
     </item>
+    <item>      
+      <p>Click the
+      <media its:translate="no" type="image"
+             src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span
+                                                 its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
+      button.</p>
+      <note>
+        <p>For a <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> connection, the 
+        <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
+        button will be located next to the active network.</p>
+      </note>
+    </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click on <gui>IPv4</gui> or <gui>IPv6</gui> in the left pane
       and change the <gui>Addresses</gui> to <em>Manual</em>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
index 3fe0be26..1dbe8825 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.28" date="2018-03-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -31,9 +32,11 @@
        in real life. -->
   <p>To set up most wired network connections, all you need to do is plug in a
   network cable. The wired network icon
-  (<media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/network-wired-symbolic.svg"><span its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>) is displayed
-  on the top bar with three dots while the connection is being established. The
-  dots disappear when you are connected.</p>
+  (<media its:translate="no" type="image"
+  src="figures/network-wired-symbolic.svg"><span
+  its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>)
+  is displayed on the top bar with three dots while the connection is being
+  established. The dots disappear when you are connected.</p>
 
   <p>If this does not happen, you should first of all make sure that your
   network cable is plugged in. One end of the cable should be plugged into the
@@ -43,7 +46,7 @@
   Ethernet port will indicate that it is plugged in and active.</p>
 
   <note>
-    <p>You can’t plug one computer directly into another one with a network
+    <p>You cannot plug one computer directly into another one with a network
     cable (at least, not without some extra setting-up). To connect two
     computers, you should plug them both into a network hub, router or
     switch.</p>