Finish reviewing bluetooth-connect-device

1 files changed, 19 insertions, 24 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
index 6f4c3ba0..4cf31569 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
@@ -7,10 +7,12 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="bluetooth"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="sharing-bluetooth"/>
-    
+    <link type="seealso" xref="bluetooth-remove-connection"/>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" date="2013-05-16" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -28,6 +30,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca@gmail.com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756@gmail.com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -65,18 +71,23 @@
     <item>
       <p>If required, confirm the PIN on your other device. The device should
       show you the PIN you see on your computer screen. Confirm the PIN on the
-      device (you may need to click <gui>Pair</gui> or
-      <gui>Confirm</gui>), then click <gui>Confirm</gui> on the computer.</p>
+      device (you may need to click <gui>Pair</gui> or <gui>Confirm</gui>),
+      then click <gui>Confirm</gui> on the computer.</p>
       <p>You need to finish your entry within about 20 seconds on most devices,
       or the connection will not be completed. If that happens, return to the
       device list and start again.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>A panel specific to the external device appears when the connection
-      successfully completes. It may display additional options applicable to
-      the type of device to which you're connecting. Select the desired options
-      and click <gui>Done</gui>. The entry for the device in the
-      <gui>Devices</gui> list will show a status of <gui>Connected</gui>.</p>
+      <p>The entry for the device in the <gui>Devices</gui> list will show a
+      <gui>Connected</gui> status.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>To edit the device, click on it in the <gui>Device</gui> list. You
+      will see a panel specific to the device. It may display additional
+      options applicable to the type of device to which you are connecting.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Close the panel once you have changing the settings.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -87,20 +98,4 @@
   <p>When one or more Bluetooth devices are connected, the Bluetooth icon
   appears in the system status area.</p>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2014-03-16" href="mailto:mdhillca@gmail.com">mdhill</cite>
-    <p>The steps detailing a connection that requires a PIN need to be updated
-    for 3.12.</p>
-  </comment>
-
-  <p>You can
-  <link xref="bluetooth-remove-connection">remove a Bluetooth connection</link>
-  later if desired.</p>
-
-  <note style="tip">
-    <p>To control sharing to your <file>Downloads</file> folder, refer to the
-    <gui>Bluetooth Sharing</gui> settings. See
-    <link xref="sharing-bluetooth"/>.</p>
-  </note>
-
 </page>