Reivew sound-* pages for 3.14

5 files changed, 52 insertions, 38 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
index 08221d8d..29ed6daf 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -24,7 +25,8 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Choose the sound to play for messages, set the alert volume, or disable alert sounds.</desc>
+    <desc>Choose the sound to play for messages, set the alert volume, or
+    disable alert sounds.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Choose or disable the alert sound</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
index ab940ec0..03d7957a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
@@ -5,9 +5,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="sound-broken"/>
 
-    <desc>Check your audio cables and sound card drivers.</desc>
-
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -15,6 +14,8 @@
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Check your audio cables and sound card drivers.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>I hear crackling or buzzing when sounds are playing</title>
@@ -57,4 +58,4 @@
   link to that for getting info on your sound card.</p>
 </comment>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
index 54bb7d0b..3fda3971 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
@@ -5,11 +5,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="sound-broken"/>
 
-    <desc>Check that it's not muted, that cables are plugged in properly, and
- that the sound card is detected.</desc>
-
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -17,15 +14,19 @@
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Check that it is not muted, that cables are plugged in properly, and
+    that the sound card is detected.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>I can't hear any sounds on the computer</title>
 
-  <p>If you can't hear any sounds on your computer, for example when you try to
- play music, try these troubleshooting steps to see if you can fix the problem.</p>
+  <p>If you cannot hear any sounds on your computer, for example when you try
+  to play music, try these troubleshooting steps to see if you can fix the
+  problem.</p>
 
 <section id="mute">
- <title>Make sure that the sound is not muted</title>
+  <title>Make sure that the sound is not muted</title>
 
   <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> from the right
   side of the top bar and make sure that the sound is not muted or turned right
@@ -61,31 +62,37 @@
 </section>
 
 <section id="device">
- <title>Check that the right sound device is selected</title>
- <p>Some computers have multiple "sound devices" installed. Some of these are
- capable of outputting sound and some are not, so you should check that you have
- the correct one selected. This might involve some trial-and-error to choose the
- right one.</p>
- <steps>
-  <item>
-   <p>From the <gui>Activities</gui> overview, start <app>Settings</app>, and
-   click <gui>Sound</gui>.</p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-   <p>In the <gui>Sound</gui> window that appears, go to the <gui>Output</gui>
- tab. Make a note of which device and which profile are selected (so you can
- return to the default selections if changing them doesn't work).</p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-   <p>For the selected device, try changing the profile—play a sound after you
- change the profile to see if it works. You might need to go through the list
- and try each profile.</p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-   <p>If that doesn't work, you might want to try doing the same for any other
- devices that are listed.</p>
-  </item>
- </steps>
+  <title>Check that the right sound device is selected</title>
+
+  <p>Some computers have multiple "sound devices" installed. Some of these are
+  capable of outputting sound and some are not, so you should check that you
+  have the correct one selected. This might involve some trial-and-error to
+  choose the right one.</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Sound</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Sound</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>In the <gui>Output</gui> tab. Make a note of which device and which
+      profile are selected (so you can return to the default selections if
+      changing them does not work).</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>For the selected device, try changing the profile—play a sound after
+      you change the profile to see if it works. You might need to go through
+      the list and try each profile.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>If that does not work, you might want to try doing the same for any
+      other devices that are listed.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
 </section>
 
 <section id="hardware-detected">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
index 2761e846..68e741a1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -24,7 +25,8 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Use an analog or USB microphone and select a default input device.</desc>
+    <desc>Use an analog or USB microphone and select a default input
+    device.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Use a different microphone</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
index c1ae8019..bc33618f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -25,7 +26,8 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Connect speakers or headphones and select a default audio output device.</desc>
+    <desc>Connect speakers or headphones and select a default audio output
+    device.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Use different speakers or headphones</title>